Ok, it was very simple and stuff, no problem at all. No preloader, it's a small file, no problem at all.
But seriously. You should at least explain step-by-step what to do. Apart from the actionscript part (that you didn't even explain, just telled people to paste it), everyone that messed around in flash for a few minutes would know.
You should do something that teaches really, not some copy and paste stuff.
I will give you some points because your effort do do it, and the simplicity.
Here's a suggestion, teach how to step by step, and explain then.
Like, teaching how to create a button, how to put the actions, explain what this action (_root.play() and stuff) do and explain how to work with buttons (the up, over, down and hit part at least).
that wasnt copy and pasted e.e
I don't like writing comments on my reviews, but i gotta say, FINALLY!
Really, i can't believe that some guys just keep random clicking to vote 5.
Oh, i don't want to offend it too, but i think it shouldn't have passed.
Well, next time, put more effort in the animation, and some music.
I hope to see more movies from you, and hope that you put more effort in these future movies. :D
Thanks for reviewing, I will sure do put more effort next time, this was sort of a test of my skills, and I don't think it would have passed if I didnt write', in those big letters, the workds saying that I would suck my balls... I just didn't tell wich balls I was going to suck... Glad you have sort of an expectation for my next movies, but they surely won't come soon, as I am busy with the school, the classes are ending, and while I don't get another Flash Trial before buying it, it will take a while until you can see a new submission from me. Thank you for you spent time to review my movie, and I don't mind you think it shouldn't have passed, cos actually, I agree with you, but it's your opinion, I am here just to read reviews and respond to people :)
Hella' Funny! Especially the "What don't you come outsaaaaaid?" sentence.
AND, it's random. I love random things, they make me laugh. ^
And for more randomness, what made me laugh more, was the "moves" that they do when talking (like the eye falling, for example). The voice acting was good too, the effects were cool too (when the guy shoots with his weapon, lol).
So random, i laughed at this movie.
I think the grafics are ok, but the animation is too slow. For example, the fat guy takes too long to eat thaty hamburguer, i think you should do a faster animation, or just give a higher FPS to the movie.
No sound and stuff, but it's a short so no problem at all. I just think it needed a background music.
Anyways, cool movie, i think it should pass judgement. :P
Nice to hear it made you laugh :)
You think it's too slow? hmm.. well the biting scene is really quite slow, but I believe the rest's fast enough. Background would be good thing, yes.
Thanks for reviewing
I laughed so hard in the mecha sonic part ^^
Also, i love the "sprite a" series, please don't stop making then. :D
It will continue soon.
Nice! And, a new way to rick roll the people! :P
It was ok, i can't do shit in 1 day, just crappy, crappy shit.
But you should make it longer, i mean, if you put some good effort in it (i'm not saying it is crap anyways), it can kick some ass :D
AW HELP! SO MUCH RANDOMNESS! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
No idea why, but it make me laugh. A lot.
The animation was not good, really.
But the "history" was awesome, i think this movie worth a remake. Or something like this.
Gostei da animação, foi bem criativa, principalmente o final.
Não tem nada de tão espetacular, mas foi bem criativo mesmo :D
E outra coisa, a animação precisou das legendas em inglês.
I liked the animation, was creative, especially the end.
There's nothing so spectacular, but it was creative :D
And another thing, the animation needed the subtitles in english.
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